tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.comments2012-02-17T18:41:29.605-06:00bunnygirlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04938134750150653386noreply@blogger.comBlogger448125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-9331528648492900272012-02-17T18:41:29.605-06:002012-02-17T18:41:29.605-06:00Sharp write! Love this 55.Mama Zenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-11723141653795346652012-02-17T10:30:02.219-06:002012-02-17T10:30:02.219-06:00Chilling, how this can be taken.Alice Audreyhttp://www.aliceaudrey.com/?page_id=4029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-88101055413452554152012-02-17T09:12:25.931-06:002012-02-17T09:12:25.931-06:00heh...nice bit of social commentary that....some men yes....niceBrian Millerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-33936149230838338032012-02-17T08:09:14.460-06:002012-02-17T08:09:14.460-06:00Sounds like a Stephen King Novel!<br />Loved your 55 Queen Ann<br />You Rock!<br />Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-EndG-Manhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-77858438010848634692012-02-17T06:05:43.836-06:002012-02-17T06:05:43.836-06:00Yikes, this hit me hard, Ann.Susan Helene Gottfriedhttp://westofmars.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-23502633291199719992012-02-17T04:21:27.560-06:002012-02-17T04:21:27.560-06:00It sure is! Both the literal meaning and the metaphor. Great 55.Doctor FTSEhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10052101566471519778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-74563935000860939152012-02-16T22:31:08.044-06:002012-02-16T22:31:08.044-06:00I love to look at old photos and imagine the people they were.Sheilagh Leehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-20332882443476076012012-02-16T12:14:32.574-06:002012-02-16T12:14:32.574-06:00&#39;my former you&#39;..I imagine that precious photograph tucked away and seeping out it&#39;s story..turning from harsh black and white to sepia..beautifully written..a fine balance of sadness which is not doused in pity..Jaejaerosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-49562758603557616032012-02-16T07:07:55.641-06:002012-02-16T07:07:55.641-06:00This is beautiful... <br /><br />Interesting approachAnya Padyamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05292308457359940182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-16276965753702660292012-02-15T23:22:14.761-06:002012-02-15T23:22:14.761-06:00I do this every day. Inside I am a young man still. I dare not look in the mirror too often lest my wife now long gone would not recognize me.<br /><br />This is truly beautiful Ann.oldegghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-70608158895526066582012-02-15T23:20:23.786-06:002012-02-15T23:20:23.786-06:00This comment has been removed by the author.oldegghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-56576615028196778212012-02-14T11:01:18.818-06:002012-02-14T11:01:18.818-06:00I like the bit about it being more interesting than that.Alice Audreyhttp://www.aliceaudrey.com/?page_id=4029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-49684969224588696682012-02-13T21:45:38.534-06:002012-02-13T21:45:38.534-06:00I love the line: Nothing is what we think; it is more interesting than that. This is a great piece and we really should enjoy the moment.Belva Rae Stapleshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16018806071465719524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-43547667185005299512012-02-13T19:58:53.544-06:002012-02-13T19:58:53.544-06:00LOL, lively, excellent.Steve Isaakhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-54604932643991855542012-02-13T16:15:45.412-06:002012-02-13T16:15:45.412-06:00This is beautifully written! I admire your style.Granny Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18214748856516412924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-31489592844378496052012-02-13T05:25:44.065-06:002012-02-13T05:25:44.065-06:00This is another one that might need to find a space on my wall! Nicely done, Ann!Susan Helene Gottfriedhttp://westofmars.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-1727721269104847492012-02-12T15:38:02.667-06:002012-02-12T15:38:02.667-06:00Marvelous!Mama Zenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-27730004331053685952012-02-12T15:17:32.030-06:002012-02-12T15:17:32.030-06:00Rest so inviting yet perhaps when invited to it we will fight tooth and nail. Awesome words you have written.oldegghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-45893605299433308092012-02-12T13:27:03.701-06:002012-02-12T13:27:03.701-06:00Nice one!Flying Monkeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12835912122094846809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-13433384457224522422012-02-12T12:35:12.497-06:002012-02-12T12:35:12.497-06:00&#39;reality dissolving into disconnect&#39;..fantastic line..and so true..looking too much is always a risk..you write so well Ann..I always leave your writing feeling amazed..Jaejaerosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-50106911936958390982012-02-12T12:01:44.538-06:002012-02-12T12:01:44.538-06:00Beautiful.<br /><br />A buddhism-style poem, is it? How interesting.Lexhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00430909088340073479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-91745544347462215562012-02-12T09:26:15.997-06:002012-02-12T09:26:15.997-06:00How funny!Mama Zenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-42087721192098723522012-02-11T05:58:56.511-06:002012-02-11T05:58:56.511-06:00Excellent little story, using dialog quite brilliantly.Doctor FTSEhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10052101566471519778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-35674681725654767732012-02-10T21:54:04.982-06:002012-02-10T21:54:04.982-06:00well played 55,<br />happy weekend.Taylor Boomerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3865412357716508981.post-66845497128462795672012-02-10T17:38:20.117-06:002012-02-10T17:38:20.117-06:00I&#39;m intrigued by the spacing and varied treatments of the different lines.<br /><br />I know a few people who are very uncomfortable when they&#39;re not in control. They frustrate me.Peter Dudleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.com